How to Write Dialogue
Your dialogue should do these things:
Move the plot forward.
All the dialogue in your story should serve some purpose. If a specific conversation is going to unravel a mystery, put in the conversation. But if your character is just saying ‘hello’ to someone and asking how they’re doing, you can just sum up what happened with a few words instead of throwing in lots of dialogue.
Help you understand relationships
The dialogue in your story should reveal relationships between characters. If two characters hate each other, the dialogue should show that by the way they speak and their interactions.
Show information about your character:
Your dialogue should be able to reveal information about who your character is. Their…
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